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Heldrad, September 9th, 2008, 2:00 am


'a part of me will go with you' sounds so weird in english D':~ I didn't know how else to translate it... any suggestion?

Also, hehe xD;; the mole appeared just now, since Caesar didn't feel it when he saw him with his hands...
umm.. but then maybe I should have drawn his mole at the beginning, since at first Caesar didn't know Yurue's face yet x_x~ I'm confusing myself.. Maybe I should just forget about the mole.. aghh, but he looks cute with the mole! Dx unless I draw the mole in all the pages?? any idea?
Sorry, I'm so lame ;_;~




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User Comments:
dani-dono, September 9th, 2008, 2:13 am


This is such a good manga~. Art, story, extremely detailed backgrounds, etc... it's all good. I especially like how you portrayed everyone as how Caeser thought they looked while he was blind - that was a very nice touch.

I think having the mole only show up after Caeser regains his sight is the best way, and helps reinforce that imagination thing. That's just my humble opinion, anyway.

I look forward to your other one shots, as well. I love one shots~.

Keep up the great work! =D


Sonamae, September 9th, 2008, 2:26 am


Maybe 'A part of me will always be with you?'

Either way this is so good, yet so sad. Poor things.


Glory Morgenbriese, September 9th, 2008, 3:24 am


Waaahh! ;_; You're makin' me cry! It's so touching, yet so upsetting at the same time. I don't want Yurue to goooo!

And I love that you didn't add the mole 'til now. :3 I agree with dani-dono's opinion.


unknown3rd, September 9th, 2008, 3:26 am


I agree with Sonamae. "A part of me will always be with you".

Awwwww.....how sad. I love the way you draw him disappearing.


killing delilah, September 9th, 2008, 6:12 am


NUUU YURUE Dx

-cries-

I agree with everyone else "A part of me will always be with you" and the mole just appearing C:


Shishibaka, September 9th, 2008, 6:19 am


NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO make it stop make it stop make it stoooop!!!!!

where are you from ?....not to ..you know...since you say the ...bla bla bla xDDD



........NOOOOOOOO don't gooo


rawrs for my sweets, September 9th, 2008, 6:22 am

DISAPEARING MOLES!!!
I love it just how it is well I guess you could say 'I will always be with you' but either way its perfect and besides I love suddenly appearing and disappearing moles. It adds a nice touch. ^-^


MitsuWrytr, September 9th, 2008, 7:01 am


-Cries-

Y-yurue...

The mole is cute, go ahead and leave it!

And could I ask what magazine you're sending this in to? I hope you get popular! I'd love to read this in Shojo beat one day! (Does shojo beat do shonen ai?)


Glori, September 9th, 2008, 7:16 am


He… he's disappearing… Oh poor Caesar, poor Yurue ;__;


BlackCatz, September 9th, 2008, 7:19 am


I agree with everyone re sentence translation as well as mole. It's a bigger impact as we've been seeing everyone thru Caesar's blindness' memory/imagination. Aww.. So amazing..and so sad..


The Whale Turkey, September 9th, 2008, 7:28 am


Ahhhh NUUUUUUU!


Shankip (Guest), September 9th, 2008, 7:53 am


;_______;


SamOnceRoyal, September 9th, 2008, 8:04 am


You've got some problems with your "neither nor" right there. Mostly because you have a double negative. "You won't neither" is essentially "you will". So make "won't" into "will" and it it's proper again.

Also, the way you made him transparent sort of makes him look more like a hologram than a fading spirit.


Regena (Guest), September 9th, 2008, 8:49 am


NO!
he's fading away!
T.T
Yurue will be remembered...
...by us and Caesar!
(aarghh, I'm so lame..)

and don't worry about the mole, it's cute :D

~Regena


moonllotus, September 9th, 2008, 9:09 am


This is so sad in a kind of bittersweet way.


Aafjez, September 9th, 2008, 9:54 am


but............NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!


Kurayami, September 9th, 2008, 9:58 am


It's romantic, but noooo! DX NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I'm dieing inside! DX Poor Boy.... boys! MEN! POOR DEARS!


catqueen13, September 9th, 2008, 10:32 am


I bet the whatever-it-is is gonna be the fourleaf clover. But that can wilt and die! DDDD: Whatever Yurue gives Caesar better be something that can never go away! TT_____TT

This made me cry! It's so sad! *cries in a puddle* p_q


nebulia, September 9th, 2008, 1:45 pm


Hmmm. "A part of me will go with you" sounds okay to me, but maybe "a part of me will always be with you" or "there will always be a part of me with you" or something might be more to your liking?

Noooo! Yurue! Come back!


FateOfDestiny, September 9th, 2008, 3:35 pm


D:

...

Proceeding to rip off your head in 3...2... Any last words? (Or page? >.>;;)


kirbyeverest, September 9th, 2008, 4:48 pm

I;m officiallly going to cry...
Aw...please no!! They're so cute togehter!!!
At leastkiss him goodbye!!! And then magically find him again!


Pokemon?, September 9th, 2008, 5:43 pm


Yeaaaaaaah.... "A part of me will go with you" sounds like he'll send his leg or something. XD Maybe change it to something like, "I will always be with you..." or... "A part of me will always be with you" or something.

Oh, and I'd eliminate the "neither" in that bubble, too. It's not necessary, and is actually grammatically incorrect. XP So long as we're on that subject.


ichnal, September 9th, 2008, 6:48 pm


OMG. OMG. WHAT?


/cries NOOOO CAESAR. YURUE.


DarkDaisuke, September 9th, 2008, 7:08 pm

Aw
Aw I love it so far read all of it ^_^ It was so cute too :D Wish he wouldn't leave though hes so cute :(


KATAL, September 9th, 2008, 9:00 pm


You are not lame! You make wonderful art, and awesome plotlines which break my heart!

I'll miss this...but it's sweet that they said goodbye. I wish they didn't have to leave, though...


NonSugar, September 9th, 2008, 9:17 pm


it breaks my heart </3


Solo, September 9th, 2008, 10:40 pm


I think it makes sense, both the new mole showing up and the 'a part of me will go with you' Maybe it should be 'a part of me will always be with you' ? I dunno, just a suggestion. :3!!

NOOOO!! WHY MUST HE GO?! D: This is too sad!!


Mae (Guest), September 9th, 2008, 11:39 pm


xD; I FEEL LIKE A HORRIBLE PERSON. Because while on one hand I was being all 'HOLY CRAP NO ;3;' on the other hand...I was thinking...

Heh..take his mole with yooou for alwaaaays.


nurix, September 10th, 2008, 8:31 am


oh dang, i thought he could see yurue forever! how can you be such a cruel-hearted manga artist heldrad?! i hate you and i love you for that. lol
and lol again for 'the mole'.


Toot, September 10th, 2008, 1:10 pm


No DON'T GO!!!

:(


Kelsafer, November 29th, 2009, 11:38 am


Awh! This made me cry! :( Don't go Yurue!


rattleandhum, February 7th, 2010, 6:16 pm


-sob- NOOOOOOOOOOOO! T______T


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