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Heldrad, September 14th, 2008, 4:03 am


OHH I can't believe I've finished! xD It's the first time I actually finish something! I feel so accomplished!
Thank you everyone for your support and kind comments so far!

Thanks for everything and I hope you enjoyed this story! >u<




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User Comments:
sensitive-TOUCH, September 14th, 2008, 4:19 am


Omg, first comment on the last page of the best comic on Smackjeeves! QwQ
You are incredible, and so is your work. The comic turned out so well! I wish you could make a continuation, but that would do no good. xD
"The first movie is always the best.", and so it goes. :P But I'd love to read a happy ending anyway. Guess that won't be helped. ^__^;;


Andreua, September 14th, 2008, 5:34 am


T.T I'll be missing Yuruee


Glori, September 14th, 2008, 5:55 am


At least they'll always remember each other ^__^


[darkdreams], September 14th, 2008, 6:29 am


this is an amazing story, very well written and i adore the artwork, im so glad i found this. wonderful work, i look forward to seeing more from you.


chibi_steff, September 14th, 2008, 8:00 am


waaah such a sad but at the same time happy ending ;A; *sobs* my gawd i had tears in my eyes when i read these last 2 pages.... you did a very good job!! that you can let people get tears in their eyes is awsome!! that means you did a very good job on the story AND the characters.... *huggs you* thanks for this awsome-ness!!


kingdomnerd, September 14th, 2008, 9:40 am


Wow. This was a wonderful story. Congratulations on finishing!

Just a suggestion about the one line on this page,:
"...because now, each time I see a flower, a tree, a river... I'll remember about him.."
That should probably be, "...because now, each time I see a flower, a tree, a river... I'll think about him...". Or "...I'll think of him..."


nurix, September 14th, 2008, 9:44 am


the end already! the end came too fast! aw, it was sad, but also a happy ending. *sighs*


Boww D: (Guest), September 14th, 2008, 10:17 am


T_T So beautiful.


xXTheMadHatterXx, September 14th, 2008, 10:19 am


Noooooo, it's too sad! Dx

I was really /really/ hoping there'd be, like, another chapter, at the end, like fifteen years later, where Caesar came back to the forest to find Yurue.... or something...

-heartbreak-

I can't take endings like this..... -sobs-


BlackCatz, September 14th, 2008, 10:25 am


Banzai!
Congrats on finishing! It's awesome!
As for the sentence as mentioned by kingdomnerd, I agree! XD
I really enjoyed it and I will miss it but I will read it often! I'll watch for any more from you !!


catqueen13, September 14th, 2008, 10:33 am


Congradulations on finishing this! I'll wish you the best of luck when submitting this to a magazine! x3

It was such a beautiful one-shot... Though like everyone else here I'm gonna miss it. I like xXTheMadHatterXx's idea about the extra chapter. It'd be so cute and satisfying! ;0; Not that this isn't cute and satisfying cuz it is! ;3;


icetea (Guest), September 14th, 2008, 11:01 am


Okay, well I'm definately satisfied with the ending ^3^
I'm rarely satisfied with the way things end, but I actually did like this one *w*
I'm surprised that some people are upset with this ending/think it's a sad one. To me this was a happy ending compared to what could've happened xD It was obvious from the start they wouldn't end up staying together, however many first-time romances are like that anyway. Ceasar is still a kid y'know and probably will have many romances in the future. It's a good thing that this romance ended well. Although I guess I can understand being sad that it ended it was a good story ^_^ thanks for posting it!

As kingdomnerd suggested the "remember about him" sentence doesn't sound right, however instead of changing the whole thing to "think of him" I think you should just eliminate the "about" so it'll be: "..each time I see a flower, a tree, a river...I'll remember him..."
I think remember is a better choice of word than think is anyway xD because of the whole 'forget-me-not' theme going on at the end. In the mean time I'll reread through the rest to point out anything else :3


Stephi, September 14th, 2008, 11:10 am


Wow, mixed emotions here. I love the ending but at the same time...i'm sad it ended ( hopes you'll do an extra chapter or something). Great work, and thanks for posting it up here so we could have the opporunity to read it. Can't wait for your next project. So be quick with your break T-T. P.S second panel " i'll remember about him" that sounds a bit odd maybe "i'll remmeber him" instead.


akari_mizunashi, September 14th, 2008, 11:21 am


Ohhh, what a lovely ending!!
There are those forget-me-nots again... ^-^


kirbyeverest, September 14th, 2008, 12:29 pm

Beautiful
I hadn't ever playyed th music att he top of the page before, and so i decided to play it as I read the last page...And it was like the perfect end of credits music. Like when they usually start it a minute before the credits start, with the last lines of the movie? It was magical....

I don't think I;ve ever really done a proper comment to you before...but honestly, your work is marvelou...Your art is always so crisp and gorgeous. ANd your story lines are so perfect...you always do just th right amountof talking, and don't rely on the characterd to constantly spil their guts inorder to make readers to understand where your characters arecomign from...Your stories are a type not many do...that olden age type of story...something I myself ADORE [anyone who loves this will love Godchild and Gorgeous Carat...just so you know XD] and can't get enough of. I always look forward to yur updates because I know they'll be awesome and make me smile. AS soon as I see you've updated, I have to keep myself from clicking it rightaway, so that I can save it for last, inorder to fully enjoy it when i turn the computeroff and have as the last one I read, so it's still fresh in my mind. I swear, if I ever see you at a con or your books instores,I totally have to grab myself a copy right there and then [even if I have to leave a kidney as down payment XD]

You have to promise me youll never lose faith in yourself and stop drawing/writing. Your work is brilliant and you'll go far with it. I just kno you'll be some big name writter some day. Move over J.K.Rowling... we've got someone with REAL spirit here. XD


anime1addict, September 14th, 2008, 12:38 pm


TwT that was so beautiful! congrats!!


maylay, September 14th, 2008, 1:16 pm


:.; oh it ended so sadly..... but i really loved it~


NonSugar, September 14th, 2008, 2:08 pm


WHAT!!! THAT'S EVIL!!!
MR.FOX AND MR. BLIND BOY HA DTO BE TOGETHER!!! PURE EVIL I SAY!!!


The Whale Turkey, September 14th, 2008, 2:25 pm

*sniff*
That was so sad though... but it was a beautiful story, I'm really glad I found our about it. ^*^


Weddles (Guest), September 14th, 2008, 2:51 pm


So, he's so used to being abandoned that he's kind of...given up? He doesn't express his negative emotions because he knows that there's nothing he can do about the situation. So...even if he did love Caesar, he didn't return it because he knew it would be easier for both of them in the end if he didn't? Damn, that's still sad. :'(

The focus of this story was really on Caesar, and how he grew as a person through the experience. Yurue didn't really change. Will one of your other one-shots focus on Yurue's character development, maybe after Caesar leaves? That would be so cool...

Anyway, I love how you created fleshed-out characters and themes, instead of a lot of other BL mangas (both amateur and professional) that only care about "OMG Yaoi *drool*."


Shishibaka, September 14th, 2008, 2:54 pm


This my friend was a beautiful story <3


Regena (Guest), September 14th, 2008, 3:40 pm


the ending was beautiful!
his first love... awww!
I'm kind of sad that this is the end, though...

I wish you luck on submitting to the magazine!


Chirurotsu, September 14th, 2008, 5:15 pm


i so luv how u ended it, and of cause yurue is really sad, he's just really the kind of guy who would cover it ^^ and i really luved how even though caesar will never see yurue, he still finds the positiv side of life!!! god there is so much i wanna say, but i have a hard time remembering wat i wanted to say, lolz, its just a great story, and it really teaches u something, thts wat i luv, i luv stories tht can give people a different view on life, i would so buy ur book when its done, and when i have money xD

oh yeah almost forgot, i luv the dialoug on this very last page, cuz everything he says is very much true, so positiv ^^


Jayjay (Guest), September 14th, 2008, 5:44 pm

;-;
Waaah, so beautiful~ <3 I've followed this since when you started, and I guess I've finally worked up the courage to comment. >w<

Your stories always give me the warm fuzzies inside! I really like how you ended this on a bittersweet note. I don't like it when authors go out of their way to make the perfect ending... this was totally natural and really fit the whole mood of the story.

I think maybe a little epilogue would be super-cute, but I honestly don't want to know anymore about Yurue. Part of what makes him such a good character is his mystery! It'd take the magic away from a story that is perfect just as it is. <3

Thank you so much for making this (and FINISHING it)! I really look forward to the other oneshots and the continuation of Cloe!! =D


KATAL, September 14th, 2008, 7:22 pm


Having this actually finished is weird. I'm not used to having a series END. Sure, there have been discontinued ones, but I always have this tiny bit of hope and all.

But this...it's over. Awfully sad for me, but I still love it. I don't think it'd be as good if it were lengthy.

Anyways, your drawings are gorgeous, your writing is great too and the plot...it's all amazing. I'll start showing it off to my friends so they can be amazed too.


Elune, September 14th, 2008, 7:42 pm


It was a very cute and touching story! I might always remember it! ^_^


Jangle00, September 14th, 2008, 9:17 pm


Beautiful!
But since you asked, one mistake I noticed was...
there is a big skip of time right? Right before Ceaser realizes he is in love. I was very confused, and had to go back and re-read it to get what was going on.


Pokemon?, September 14th, 2008, 9:28 pm


Aw, what a sweet way to end it. ^^ A couple suggestions on this page, though...


Firstly, "I'll remember about him" is kinda awkward to say. "I'll remember him" would be better.

Secondly, "Into a part of my own..." what? Do you mean "into a part of me"? Or maybe, "into a part of my heart"? Or something? Because trailing off with the word "own" makes it seem like the story is inconclusive. It's probably better to end it with a more solid sentence.

That's all, thanks for letting me ramble. ^^;


the_goddess_of_chaos, September 14th, 2008, 10:22 pm


this...was...f****ing AMAZING!!!!! I'm very sad that it's over...but I'm glad that you finished it ^^
the story was so beautiful, the art was to!!!! this is one that I will keep on reading <3333333


Blumchen (Guest), September 15th, 2008, 12:30 am


Oh dear goodness. I can't believe this is the end already! This was truly a pleasure to read. I can't wait until you complete a few more oneshots to complete a full volume!

As for a few improvements, just on this page, "remember about him" is better as "I'll remember him" and I'm not sure where you are going with "into a part of my own". I think it might sound better as "And into a part of my own heart..." or "And into a part of myself, too..." if that is what you mean.

Will you ever do any thing else with Caesar and Yurue? Like, sketches, silly little side comics or anything?


Aafjez, September 15th, 2008, 1:26 am


It was beautiful.......please make more?


saigo_namida, September 15th, 2008, 1:54 am


muy lindo flor!!^^
la neta ke si
io no he acabado de entintar el mio, puedes creerlo?!!!
jaja
pero hoy termino y ps empiezo a traducir los dialogos jeje asi ke preparate a recibir mis pms XD


Shankip (Guest), September 15th, 2008, 9:45 am


Yo~ ^-^
I really enjoyed reading this. ;A;
I was afraid it will have a sad ending because I'm a cry baby >-<
but I think the ending has a very, um, sort of magical feeling to it *A* and none of them cried too much so I'm alright~ :D
Thanks for sharing this wonderful story, characters and art with us! <3
Shani.


Wolfen, September 15th, 2008, 4:44 pm

!
Beautiful :) !
Well, I like every one of the pages *heart* but If you want an opinion, I think Cloe Remembrance has better work with pannels, you know, the composition of the page.
But the story is sweet, and the characters have a lot of personality ;)


zerozero, September 15th, 2008, 4:58 pm


it's over?
it's OVER?
TT_______TT
but awesome things like this don't end... :(
oh well. TT____TT <-tears of joy


AngelPoison, September 15th, 2008, 5:45 pm


wow this was brillent!!!

this was sad but happy (crys)

love ^^


moonllotus, September 15th, 2008, 7:06 pm


Such a bittersweet story. Wonderful job~


DarkMimi, September 16th, 2008, 12:04 am


That was truly a beautiful ending... and usually I stomp and pout because I don't want it to end. -Claps-

Some suggestions... hm... your art is impeccable. I can't see anything wrong with that. Just go back and remember to check your spelling, grammar counts as well.


Scholl, September 16th, 2008, 11:50 am


Felicidades te quedo muy cool todo tu trabajo... eres genial...:)


pickleddragoneyes, September 16th, 2008, 11:44 pm


wow...
T^T It's over already?
I think it's a brilliant ending; just perfect for the story. Well done. Absolutely well done
Now I'm off to wait for it to get published and put on the shelf so I can buy a copy ^ ^


SkirtZ, September 17th, 2008, 1:53 pm


I love this page. It's a very nice ending. After poor Caeser crying it gives you a feeling that everything's okay again.


Thisisanalias, September 17th, 2008, 5:29 pm


Oh gosh! This was such a beautiful story!! I find myself smiling like a dork at this last page. These characters really captured my heart, and while I'll really miss them, I don't think this story could have ended better. Thank you for this Heldrad!


kagomesan (Guest), September 17th, 2008, 7:18 pm

wow
your story is awesome and i hope you get it published! i would defenetly buy it! but i wanted to ask u something: how did yo get soo good? did u learn on ur own or did you go to school and study how to do the shading, background etc.? i am going to post my own story pretty soon and i wanted some advice on how it should be done. i really would like ur advice!!!!! thank you and i admire your style !


shadowrider7, September 17th, 2008, 8:42 pm


I know it's a feel-good story and all... But now I'm really depressed that Caeser will never see Yurue again. And that he never got to even kiss him! D: So... good story... but I'm gonna go eat some cookies and watch anime to cheer myself up.


Solo, September 18th, 2008, 1:02 am


D:

I'm so sad...I don't like the ending! I don't thinks it's happy at alll~~!! *whimpers and rubs eyes* I mean..the story was wonderful and you're amazing..everything's amazing I just..always need a happy ending T^T!!

Damn you Disney! Look what you've done! I still haven't recovered from the Fox and the Hound!


Strawberry Nya, September 19th, 2008, 10:41 pm


I've never commented on someone's comic before. But I feel like I need to do it.

You don't know how much this moved me! The feelings were so... real. The lesson in it was awesome! Even before the end, I was crying. Maybe I'm just overemotional but it was so heartbreaking and loving, the artwork is simply amazing as well. I really don't want it to end this fast, but the ending (although bittersweet) is splendid!

I hope you did well with submitting it to the magazine!
And I agree, adding an extra chapter or something would be great (no pressure though XD)


Shadows and Ashes, September 30th, 2008, 12:00 am


T-T This made me so sad! It's beautifully done, though. The writing and the art. Thank you for posting this.


hdnlv, October 3rd, 2008, 12:01 am


awwwww! this is so beautiful & sweet ! :3 *tear >3<


O.K.METRO, October 7th, 2008, 5:37 pm


Such an amazing ending! Really, though, I feel like crying!


Ichipowa, October 13th, 2008, 9:14 pm

T~T
i'll say it! i cried.. i really did. <...< it was touching really and just to tell you ^^ you're a wonderful artist


Rai-Chan (Guest), November 18th, 2008, 10:01 pm

D'x
You made me cry silently. D'x

I can't believe they couldn't even share a farewell kiss. I mean come on. >(

But still the ending was wonderful and I loved it!!

-sniffles-

You should make a squiel. =DDD

JK but srsly no goodbye kiss -sighs- that would be soo romantical. lolz. Sorry for my random words.

Anyways I give you like 10/10 and I would buy it but eh no mooney sorry!

-huggles- I wove you!! <3


Lanavis, November 22nd, 2008, 7:54 am

AIEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
This is wonderful! The ending was so...so bittersweet, but KAWAII! Thanks for letting us all read this, arigato!


Abild, January 21st, 2009, 4:09 am


That was so beautiful.. Probably the most beautiful story I've ever read. Oh my god, it even made my cry. I'm still crying, it was just so fantastic.. That was amazing, thank you so much for sharing this wonderful tale with us.


Regg (Guest), March 23rd, 2009, 12:59 am


Simply fantastic. Great job :)
I cannot wait to buy your volume! Take care!


Miranda686 (Guest), March 27th, 2009, 6:02 pm


That was so great! You should post extra pics of the characters together...

The plot was so beautiful! The ending felt like it was incomplete, though. That's just me, though. Love it, and I hope it gets published in a magazine!


xXCheckersXx, May 23rd, 2009, 6:49 pm


WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! This was so cute and sweet and lovely and amazing!! ;---;
WHY DID IT HAVE TO END!


meranii (Guest), June 21st, 2009, 1:36 am


I don't think I've ever cried before when reading a webcomic.

I love your artwork, your plots, your characters, your stories. They're absolutely amazing! This was stunning and bittersweet. I think I'll be looking at things a little differently from now on.

Wow... I hope this made it into the magazine and you got a good place in the manga contest!


Lila Bolger, August 30th, 2009, 3:39 pm


waah!
eres genial!
Espero que no haya problema en comentarte en español, aún no soy lo suficientemente buena con el inglés n.n
Realmente amé tu comic, y espero, de verdad, que ganaras en ese concurso (que metiche, verdad? jeje).
Son tan lindos, los dos, pero Caesar me cae mejor... supongo que es por que fue Yurue quien tan facilmente se deshizo de Caesar xD
No se, para mi fue una nueva forma de "novela" romantica.. no se, de cualquier forma, sabes que tu comic es el primero que leo en mi vida?
Al principio creia que estabas traduciendo y editando alguno de Nipon, por que llegue aqui por un link que tu misma (eres chica, cierto?) dejaste en una pagina donde se podia bajar el manga de Axis Power Hetalia, donde hiciste una pregunta sobre si editabas bien, o algo asi...
(ya me hice bolas xD)
El caso es que me di cuenta que tu lo hiciste, y tengo que felicitarte por eso.
eres muy talentosa, y todo lo que te dicen los chicos de aqui es verdad y yo los secundo, a pesar de que no tengo referencias u otros comics con que compararlo, se que este es un trabajo de lo mejor.
Gracias por dejarnos soñar un poquito con tan maravillosa historia ^.^
Un Beso!

P.D: Yo tambien soy mexicana. Actualmente de BC ^.^
Yoroshiko!!!


SomethingisAmisss, November 13th, 2009, 6:53 pm


That was so beautiful D': rofl, I'm getting all emotional, maybe I'm tired but that was probbaly one of the best comics on here. EVER.


Kelsafer, November 29th, 2009, 11:43 am


T.T Still crying! This was adorable and beautiful! This is in my top rank of one of the best comics in the world!


.:.The- Upset- Unicorn.:., December 26th, 2009, 3:57 am

=O
this should be made into a movie! im not kidding! i loooooove it sooo~ and listening to your music made me cry~ (;u;)AWESOME JOB! *sob*


MoonlightShadow, January 1st, 2010, 9:59 pm

Terrific!!
Your comic is beautiful! Really heart touching :). You really know how to mess with people emotions through your art XD!! Awesome ending awesome story!!


Clouds.Of.Rabbits, August 29th, 2011, 1:36 pm


This story was so sweet and beautiful. :')

<3


lupus_lady, September 25th, 2011, 12:02 pm

AWE
AWE THIS WAS SO SWEET!!! At first I thought it was going to be depressing but then just so sweet and cute at the end. Great job!


AiCherushi, December 8th, 2011, 5:01 am


Oh my gosh this was amazing ;w; it's so touching~ I want to cryyyyy ;3;


nibbler56, January 28th, 2012, 10:16 pm


This was so sweet and meaningful! I'm actually crying!


Midzuki_no_Seiei, August 3rd, 2012, 6:17 am


This comic was so heart-touching! It was beautiful! This is definitely going in my 'Remember until the day I die' list!


highfiveyousuck, June 30th, 2017, 11:53 am


wow, this was such a beautiful comic, all then detail in the backgrounds was gorgeous and i liked that you put in that things looked to us how caesar imagined them to look. and the end was so happy and hopeful despite the fact that caesar had to leave and i just loved with this with my whole heart i will definitely have to check out more of your work


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